coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

[realitymods]

How's my driving?

The rules of the game are as follows: comment to this post with a list of your characters. Other players will provide constructive criticism and positive feedback. You do the same because community is built on reciprocity, we are told.

While we would prefer everyone be honest and open with each other and we would hope you'd feel safe voicing concerns, anonymous commenting is permitted. However, moderators will be moderating; we don't have any marshmallows, so we don't want flames going on here. Wanking is forbidden. If you don't have anything nice to say, phrase what you do have to say politely.

That said, please don't post here if you don't feel able to handle constructive criticism. A well thought-out, helpful critique can be a wonderful thing and shows that people care. When you're critiquing others, try to be specific about what works and what doesn't, as that can be very useful for pinpointing what a player should keep and what a player should let go.

Commence!

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[onehundredbeers]

Ray Carling - gotitwrong
Nathan Explosion - onehundredbeers

[semantics]

✘ ♛ ♰ ⊕ ♄

Sebastian Flyte Ootori Kyouya Hiwatari Satoshi Braxiatel Jade Curtiss

fruitbrandy hostclubmommy incommand collectionist fonicartestry

{private concrit} {private concrit} {private concrit} {private concrit} {private concrit}

Crit on Jade is especially wanted! He is new, and annoying, and difficult, and weird. But mostly difficult. Pointing out things being done wrong with any of them is helpful, but with Jade it is especially so. Because he is silly and he smells bad.

[thrall]

ASCH ► Tales of the Abyss (d1) ► promisedsomeone
AXEL ► Kingdom Hearts (d4) ► smolderingdark
DAISUKE ► D•N•Angel (d1) ► insynch
EMIL ► Tales of Symphonia (d2) ► pactum
SIRKKA ► FreakAngels (d1) ► newworldlover

Each has personal concrit floating at the top of their journal or linked in their profile. I've been slipping a little lately with my new muses and that's mostly stress, but still, if there's something IMMENSELY WRONG please tell me so I can correct it. Also I dropped Ikki because I can't get his muse back after this crap. Sorry.

/bites fingernails

[astronomia]

Chris Skelton ☇ knowswheregodis
Argentine ☇ artiscordis
Luke fon Fabre ☇ royallybitching
Sherlock Holmes ☇ rationalist
Antimony Carver ☇ neverindanger

&

Fujioka Haruhi ☇ virginaesthetic
Merlin ☇ behindhiswords


The last two I'm sort of considering maybe dropping for a bit because I am failing hardcore with them and losing them and yes. But! Feedback would be lovely please. Especially on Luke and Sherlock? I'm nervous about them.

[oliverplus]

Oliver Day | oliverplus

Oliver has been going through a lot of crazy stuff lately, so I'm definitely interested in whether or not his reactions/development have been realistic.

[maturelildevil.livejournal.com]

Hitachiin Kaoru - maturelildevil
The Tenth Doctor (d6) - bit_impossible
Donna Noble - forever_noble

So, yeah, I dropped Straxus... And it's been interesting with Ten's choice recently and playing with lines (and sometimes crossing them? Hmm.)

[melissa-228.livejournal.com]

Suou Tamaki || hostclubdaddy || Ouran Host Club || private concrit (http://hostclubdaddy.livejournal.com/1376.html)
Rose Tyler || shewalks_away || Doctor Who || private concrit (http://shewalks-away.livejournal.com/3176.html)
Charles Ryder || suchatourist || Brideshead Revisited || private concrit (http://suchatourist.livejournal.com/1362.html)
Arthur Pendragon || destinedking || Merlin || private concrit (http://destinedking.livejournal.com/1247.html)
Bernice Summerfield || brandyhabit || Doctor Who || private concrit (http://brandyhabit.livejournal.com/710.html)
Kuronuma Sawako || superoptimistic || Kimi ni Todoke || private concrit (http://superoptimistic.livejournal.com/736.html)

[millenia]

Mm.

Kuhn ► silenteden
Marta ► formervanguard
Naminé ► breathenothing
Private concrits available at the top of their respective journals

I know I've been slacking on tags. Regardless, hit me with your best shot. This goes for crit on me as well, if you think there's something that I need to fix as a player that isn't necessarily related to my characters.

Hit me with it, I can take it, and lately I've been feeling like there's something wrong. So if someone else knows what it is, that'd be good to hear. Or I could be crazy. ♥

[unto-death.livejournal.com]

Botta - unto_death

I'm still sort of getting back on my feet with him, and occasionally I am bad at keeping up with tags because of my goldfish memory, but please let me know if there's anything awful that bugs you? I'll do my best to fix it early on rather than let it get worse.

[kuribohcoast.livejournal.com]

Mu @ lamb_of_gold

and

Isaac @ grand_gaia

I feel like I've been really shaky with them both, Mu especially. plz to confirm/deny/punch in the face.

They've both got personal Concrit somewhere in their journals if you'd prefer that.


/crawls under cover

[helical.livejournal.com]

Omega | cosmic_engineer
Narvin | practicalrobes

[whitelighter]

ღ ⇒ ♕

Roxas [d4] Sefton Lowell HMD post

sunkenlight polarisation over here

[nodoff.livejournal.com]

☇ Romanadvoratrelundar tastefulfashion {HMD (http://tastefulfashion.livejournal.com/53866.html)}
☇ Haibara Ai asmallamoroso {HMD (http://asmallamoroso.livejournal.com/2431.html)}

THIS IS RATHER POINTLESS OF ME TO POST TO BUT I LIKE JUMPING THE BANDWAGON.

[bonnypiperlad]

Jamie McCrimmon || bonnypiperlad

Private HMD also at the top of the journal, if you prefer.

[buckingbronco.livejournal.com]

Shun - shunofandromeda
Dino - buckingbronco
Shion - ram_of_gold
Firesong - flawless_genius

[reverseptsd.livejournal.com]

John Watson - reverseptsd

[anoblesavage.livejournal.com]

Leela of the Sevateem [anoblesavage]

[shobogan.livejournal.com]

Fifth Doctor (Doctor Who d2) miseardae
Remus Lupin (Harry Potter d3) oncemarauder
Kate Lockley (Angel d2) borntostand
Barbara Gordon (DC d1) bodilesswarrior

[boxtheotaku.livejournal.com]

Box - [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]

[tomysister.livejournal.com]

Reiko - tomysister
Tear - youidiots

Ahaha. Personal issues making me drop all my tags for like the past week aside, let me know.

[alien-catcher.livejournal.com]

Alex Drake (d1) | poshmouthytart | {Private Crit (http://poshmouthytart.livejournal.com/2758.html)}
Gwen Cooper (d1) } alien_catcher | (Private Crit (http://alien-catcher.livejournal.com/30041.html))
Irene Adler (d1) | thewomanswit | (Private Crit (http://thewomanswit.livejournal.com/2923.html))

[tsunderes.livejournal.com]

I have been quite busy with school, and this isn't ending in the foreseeable future, so sorry for any threads I've dropped. If you have your heart set on finishing something, let me know and I'll get to it once life calms down. Which might be in December. But I will get to it.