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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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I've loved seeing Brax handle this plot.
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I've rather enjoyed shoving him down through it and watching him outwit my plans for him, so I'm glad you've enjoyed it, too.
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It's fascinating! I kind of want to hug him, and shake my head at him, and study him, and lock him in a nice safe room forever. And I love his relationships with Barbara.
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anymoreI do too! You have no idea how long I struggled over actually getting him to spit out what he was seeing to her, and then Barbara's response---ah, she is so the sort of person Brax would happily add to his Collection. There is, I feel, a magnificent click to the personalities.
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for now :|I struggled over her response, too! And her own description. IT WAS AN ENJOYABLE STRUGGLE THOUGH.
I think they're really are similar in a lot of ways, at least as much as they can be. I really need to send Babs to the Plane while she's in Oracle Mode some time.
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Peony gets mad at him when he does it so it's not worth the headache.YES IT WAS. I actually spammed Mel with mine to see if it was okay.
Oooh, I'd love to see that! I saw she signed the note to Ezra with that mask and it was adorableee.
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FUN ANGST FOR ALL. ...No fair I want someone to spam at. I THOUGHT IT WAS BRILLIANT THOUGH. Oh Brax.
I'm still trying to work out her reply! SHE IS WORRIED. Also, can people end up on the Plane because of a subconscious desire to be there? (And I also need to do that experiment where she's Batgirl again.)
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Angst is so satisfying when it's characters you have to beat up to get it out of, I feel. PS as mod I have special seeing-answer privileges and omg babs ;-;
EZRA IS REALLY WORRISOME. And... hmm, well, we always talk about it like it's a sort of kicking/walking/whatever thing, so I guess so? I mean, you can subconsciously twist your fingers, I think? Or when you fall off a building you can subconsciously go "shit" and port out to the Plane? (...Yes~)
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Yes! Always better when you have to work for it. I knooow. At first I thought she'd just say fix the city and that would be it? But there's SO MUCH and she's been seeing him a lot lately, and his death basically represents everything wrong about her world - herself, her cause, her allies - to her.
WHY SUCH A WOOBIE, EZRA. You can! Like your fists clenching in anger with your realising, or tapping nervously and so on. And the Plane is basically associated with peace and freedom in her head, save...this going on right now, so if she's in the middle of something really intense she might be feeling GOD I'D RATHER BE ON THE PLANE RIGHT NOW and maybe accidentally take her badass interface with her. (It will be fuuun~)
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That is sad and terrible and oh man Barbaraaaa.
BECAUSE HE IS. Hahah, since I know Ezra's backstory, I can say why he's a woobie. But I'll leave that to Kisha. And yeah, that seems fair enough. Though I speak as one mod alone! It may be best to run it by the other two as well.
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And so of course once Jason comes back they NEVER INTERACT ONCE.
I can't wait to find out! I am loving this plot so much, have I mentioned? SO MUCH. ♥
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dagadsg that's infuriating and horrible
♥ I am glad!