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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
realitymods) wrote in shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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Angst is so satisfying when it's characters you have to beat up to get it out of, I feel. PS as mod I have special seeing-answer privileges and omg babs ;-;
EZRA IS REALLY WORRISOME. And... hmm, well, we always talk about it like it's a sort of kicking/walking/whatever thing, so I guess so? I mean, you can subconsciously twist your fingers, I think? Or when you fall off a building you can subconsciously go "shit" and port out to the Plane? (...Yes~)
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Yes! Always better when you have to work for it. I knooow. At first I thought she'd just say fix the city and that would be it? But there's SO MUCH and she's been seeing him a lot lately, and his death basically represents everything wrong about her world - herself, her cause, her allies - to her.
WHY SUCH A WOOBIE, EZRA. You can! Like your fists clenching in anger with your realising, or tapping nervously and so on. And the Plane is basically associated with peace and freedom in her head, save...this going on right now, so if she's in the middle of something really intense she might be feeling GOD I'D RATHER BE ON THE PLANE RIGHT NOW and maybe accidentally take her badass interface with her. (It will be fuuun~)
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That is sad and terrible and oh man Barbaraaaa.
BECAUSE HE IS. Hahah, since I know Ezra's backstory, I can say why he's a woobie. But I'll leave that to Kisha. And yeah, that seems fair enough. Though I speak as one mod alone! It may be best to run it by the other two as well.
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And so of course once Jason comes back they NEVER INTERACT ONCE.
I can't wait to find out! I am loving this plot so much, have I mentioned? SO MUCH. ♥
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dagadsg that's infuriating and horrible
♥ I am glad!