realitymods: (turn)
realitymods ([personal profile] realitymods) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

How's my driving?

The rules of the game are as follows: comment to this post with a list of your characters. Other players will provide constructive criticism and positive feedback. You do the same because community is built on reciprocity, we are told.

While we would prefer everyone be honest and open with each other and we would hope you'd feel safe voicing concerns, anonymous commenting is permitted. However, moderators will be moderating; we don't have any marshmallows, so we don't want flames going on here. Wanking is forbidden. If you don't have anything nice to say, phrase what you do have to say politely.

That said, please don't post here if you don't feel able to handle constructive criticism. A well thought-out, helpful critique can be a wonderful thing and shows that people care. When you're critiquing others, try to be specific about what works and what doesn't, as that can be very useful for pinpointing what a player should keep and what a player should let go.

Commence!
millenia: Millenia - Grandia II (Default)

[personal profile] millenia 2010-10-24 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Mm.

Kuhn ► [livejournal.com profile] silenteden
Marta ► [livejournal.com profile] formervanguard
Naminé ► [livejournal.com profile] breathenothing
Private concrits available at the top of their respective journals

I know I've been slacking on tags. Regardless, hit me with your best shot. This goes for crit on me as well, if you think there's something that I need to fix as a player that isn't necessarily related to my characters.

Hit me with it, I can take it, and lately I've been feeling like there's something wrong. So if someone else knows what it is, that'd be good to hear. Or I could be crazy. ♥
Edited 2010-10-24 00:07 (UTC)

[identity profile] pactum.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
I think Marta needs to take her clothes off.
ext_1141078: (and the air outside so soft)

[identity profile] formervanguard.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
I think Emil should help her with that task.

[identity profile] pactum.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
HOW DO I KISS PURTY GIRL
ext_1141078: (They're not yours they are my own)

[identity profile] formervanguard.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
IDK JUST SAYIN' I'VE KINDA BEEN AFTER YOU SINCE DAY ONE, WAY TO BE DUMB. FO REAL.

[identity profile] pactum.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
EMIL IS SO DUMB

HE IS REALLY DUMB

FO REAL

hide yo kids hide yo wife
ext_1141078: (Poverty stole your golden shoes)

[identity profile] formervanguard.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
HE'S CLIMBIN' IN YO WINDOWS, HE'S SNATICHIN' YO PEOPLE UP!
lamb_of_gold: (mrrt)

[personal profile] lamb_of_gold 2010-10-24 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
You need to hit Puberty first.
oliverplus: (Stars)

[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-26 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
I always have fun when Kuhn and Oliver interact! Our threads have been short, but I've definitely enjoyed the interactions they've had. I'd love for Oliver and Kuhn to hang out more!
millenia: Millenia - Grandia II (Default)

[personal profile] millenia 2010-10-26 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
I love threading with Oliver, and I wish life would chill the hell out so I could tag a bit more and get some longer stuff going. ♥ We will definitely keep their interactions strong in the future!