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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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Poor guy.no subject
I think someone needs a hug.
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In some dark, secret place very, very deep inside him, an eight-year-old Narvin really wants a hug. Possibly from Benny, because she was nice to him.
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don't move in on Brax's girlTHAT IS SO CUTE and metaly he will never live it down.no subject
Jealous of an eight year old, Irving?And he will have Convenient Amnesia when he's grown back up.no subject
if he says yes, is it justifiable homicide?Very Convenient Amnesia that Braxiatel will never believe.Don't think he won't holorecord it.
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No, Irving. Killing eight year olds is bad. Even if they do grow up to be irritating Coordinators.That's blackmail, Brax!
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what about using eight-year-olds to kill other people?No, it's part of his mandate: to preserve the past and in doing so safeguard the future.
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That's bad too, especially when they're your best friend's son.Narvin promises to find his way back on Brax's Collection to destroy that holo.
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He did it out of looooooooooooooove---oh god he has a Time Lord's idea of loveBraxiatel would respond with long monologue about the development of print technology in Earth's history and how it affected what it meant to keep a text alive, but what he really means is that Narvin can't destroy the holo when Brax has duplicates.
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He really does. Time Lords suck at love. Possessiveness, on the other hand...That's what Braxiatel thinks.
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You mean possessiveness isn't love? That's going to come as a shocker.Yes, yes it is what he thinks. And he still thinks it.
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It does to most Time Lords. Does he really want to compared to Rassilon?It would be such a shame if Narvin had to breech all of the Collection's defences in order to get each duplicate.
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ewwwwwwww no Rassilon tried to do crazy things to his little broThe lengths to which Narvin claims he would go to retrieve the copies only proves what value they are. And Braxiatel can't help that, as a collector, he hates to give up valuable things.
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He is also first among possessive bastards. Don't be a possessive bastard, Brax!Just wait. Narvin's going to start carrying around a holorecorder, so that when something inevitably happens to Brax, he'll be ready. Maybe he'll catch another breakdown; something to show the Council if they ever think about rescinding Brax's exile.
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He's a collector. It's in the job description!It is telling in a tragic way that Narvin considers his child-self's desire for physical affection to be equivalent to a psychological breakdown inspired by the assorted pressures under which Braxiatel works. So sad, so sad.
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And he says please don't embarrass him in front of his President, Bernice. He'll never recover.no subject
Now he's starting to sound like Brax!