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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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The rules of the game are as follows: comment to this post with a list of your characters. Other players will provide constructive criticism and positive feedback. You do the same because community is built on reciprocity, we are told.
While we would prefer everyone be honest and open with each other and we would hope you'd feel safe voicing concerns, anonymous commenting is permitted. However, moderators will be moderating; we don't have any marshmallows, so we don't want flames going on here. Wanking is forbidden. If you don't have anything nice to say, phrase what you do have to say politely.
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People don't generally realize just how much Brax appreciates Ming vases!That is a diversion from Braxiatel's assertion.
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But people aren't objects!But a valid one.
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Yes they are! They are objects that are even more breakable and difficult to care of than non-living objects. They require very special handling to be maintained, as they get damaged and lost at the simplest provocations. And there simply is no extending them past their natural lifespan without losing something of the original work.It doesn't detract from Brax's argument.
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Has Brax considered that maybe they don't want his care?Brax hasn't offered any to Narvin's, either.
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Considered and rejected.That Braxiatel has psychological issues? It's true and not a matter of debate. The point stands that Narvin is horrified by the thought of anyone knowing he, as a child, sought and received an embrace.
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Omega says 'hi', Rass.It's none of anyone's business.
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In some circles, that would be a compliment.Certainly not. And that is why Braxiatel will keep the holos safe for Narvin.
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Ah, but would Braxiatel consider it to be a compliment?Narvin trusts his own security far more than Braxiatel's.
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...No, but despite being arrogant and patronizing, he has an accurate enough idea of his own failings to accept that the comparison may not be entirely faulty.Then it's a shame he doesn't have a choice in the matter.