coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

[realitymods]

How's my driving?

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Commence!

Comments

[polarization]

You are totally fine. First off, thank you! ♥ This means a lot, and I'm really glad you like Roxas. He and Oliver hitting it off was pretty awesome, and I'm especially amused that he got Oliver to snap out of the Puppeteer-thing through sheer force of Shounen Hero Logic.

As for Sefton's ability and it being permanent, I'll give you a sneak peek at how I worded the possibility of Sefton's ability wearing off in my e-mail to the mods:

This mental effect is subtle. The affected will not realize they have been affected unless they stop to take a long look at themselves and gauge their initial opinion of Sefton to how they currently view him and notice a discrepancy. The more that someone is affected, the longer it will take for the effect to wear off; I have imagined this as the effect being a stone pillar (which grows stronger the more someone is affected), and as long as it stands, the effect will continue. With time, however, it will decay and rot, making it easier to knock down if the affected knows it is there to do so.

This is my basic idea for how the effect wearing off would work (hopefully it's coherent enough!). I haven't heard back from the mods on whether it will stay that way or they'll ask me to revise it, mind, but it's something to think about for now?

[oliverplus]

Roxas is just that cool XD!

Ohhh, I like it! And I'm glad that was a helpful comment. I didn't want to make you repeat yourself ^^; But Oliver insists that he's going to get closer to Sefton, ability or not. Because Oliver is like that >.>;