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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
realitymods) wrote in shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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One problem I've had with Isaac is that sometimes, there doesn't seem much to go off of in a response to him. And I suspect this may in part be because you're feeling shaky, so it's hard to get a response out of it. Have you considered trying to push through that and just give longer tags? Elaborate more, let the muses blurt out more? I know that sometimes when I'm having trouble with one, forcing them to actually speak more than I might want to kicks the voice and personality back into gear.
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Part of my issues with Isaac is that he doesn't actually talk, so it's not like I have much to fall back on when I can't quite grab his voice. Also there's a Golden Sun sequel due out VERY SOON, and I'm terrified that'll throw a wrench into things.
BUT. I will take that suggestion into account! I thank you.
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uh I mean
it's definitely a problem for a silent hero, so perhaps throwing in more action to communicate could help?
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hooraaaay post-canon. /headdesk
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(It's like, 30-odd years after Golden Sun, too. ISAAC SPAWNED. I DON'T KNOW HOW OR WITH WHO, BUT HE DID.)
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(....what. no way. I SUGGEST SPORING.)
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(I know right? The thought of Isaac being a dad is a bit screwy. I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHO MOM WAS AND THEN I'LL BE OKAY.
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THIS SO HARD. ::HEADDESK. HEADDESK. HEADDESK.::
Gods it was such a mistake pulling Kuhn entirely post-canon. I haven't had shit to do with him on his own. D: If it weren't for having CR with people who have shit going on, or the mods swooping in to smack him with plotsomethings, I would be SO BORED WITH HIM.
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