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shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
realitymods) wrote in shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever
How's my driving?
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The rules of the game are as follows: comment to this post with a list of your characters. Other players will provide constructive criticism and positive feedback. You do the same because community is built on reciprocity, we are told.
While we would prefer everyone be honest and open with each other and we would hope you'd feel safe voicing concerns, anonymous commenting is permitted. However, moderators will be moderating; we don't have any marshmallows, so we don't want flames going on here. Wanking is forbidden. If you don't have anything nice to say, phrase what you do have to say politely.
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WELL, I loved Axel and Daisuke. Hope to meet them more. /fail 'critic' Sorry I can't really say anything about Asch yet until I finish with the anime. /double fail for not playing the game >>; But he is so... cute, so far.
Sirkka, why, she is complex isn't she? >>; It's amazing, and I think you can pull it off rather well,
and would love her to have a Jack, just to see how it would work. Um, critic, right... uh, keep it up!no subject
I'll try to take Axel and Dai-su-ki out of the box more ♥ Daisuke's actually super depressed right now and that makes him reluctant to talk to anyone since every thread will be basically FAKE!SMILING and reassuring himself that it will get better.
Sirkka sure is complex, thank you! I'm.. really trying. Sometimes I don't think I understand her at all, like she's letting me glance inside her head but only the parts she feels are 'nice' enough for everyone else to see. but then shit happens and she does things like try to tear Nathan in half... :|
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Oo; Nathan must have... deserved it? >>;
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And that was Nathan's consequence. She'd never snap like that otherwise. They will kiss and make up later D: