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realitymods ([personal profile] realitymods) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

How's my driving?

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Commence!

[identity profile] anoblesavage.livejournal.com 2010-10-24 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
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[personal profile] astronomia 2010-10-26 11:25 am (UTC)(link)
I really want you to know that I'm enjoying Leela and Sherlock's interactions. They surprised me but it's really fun. And it helps that your Leela is perfect. I'm really terribly fond of her and it makes me happy to have her around. I have no good crit but I just wanted you to know that.

[identity profile] atraphoenix.livejournal.com 2010-10-26 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, me too! It was a very unexpected friendship but it's turned out to be a lot of fun. And thank you. I've turned quite an impressive shade of red now.
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[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-26 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I really enjoy your Leela, too! I can always hear her voice in my head from the way you write. And you really give a great sense of Leela's personality. Like, she mentions how she isn't wise--she works more from her heart--but at the same time you can feel that she's the mature Leela of Gallifrey (rather than Leela travelling with Four). I particularly felt that when she and Oliver were talking about the Doctor and what he sees in people. Also, Leela is still the brave warrior, even while having matured, and I think you balance these different aspects of her really well.

[identity profile] atraphoenix.livejournal.com 2010-10-27 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this is one of the nicest comments I've ever received. Thank you very much. I'm glad she comes across as Gallifrey!Leela rather than her younger counterpart and I'm very glad you like her.