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realitymods ([personal profile] realitymods) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

How's my driving?

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Commence!
oliverplus: (Smirk)

[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-26 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your Jamie. I think I've said it before, but I think you do a fantastic job of capturing his voice in your style of writing--whatwith och and everything else he says. I can hear him really well!

You also have a fantastic grasp of his personality. I totally giggled when you mentioned...in an ooc comment on a plot post somewhere. I don't remember exactly, but you talked about Jamie's danger sense, and it just all fits so well! Even little things, like I saw your recent thread with Jamie and Ten, and I about died when Ten tried to distract the zombies, and Jamie just kept fighting them until Ten yelled at him to run. It's such a Jamie thing to do!

So, I think you're doing a fantastic job, and I look forward to having more Jamie and Oliver fun!
bonnypiperlad: (smile)

[personal profile] bonnypiperlad 2010-10-27 05:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!!! <3 Although that reminds me - I need to work some more of that aspect into some of the tags, as that should be affecting him more. This juggling everything that's happening in action tags is tough. :)
oliverplus: (Small Laugh)

[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-28 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I know what you mean! With all the consequences and consequences on top of consequences going around right now, it is quite a lot to juggle XD. But I think you're doing a lovely job as is!