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realitymods ([personal profile] realitymods) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc2010-10-23 07:33 pm
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coordinated with the activity check for the first time ever

How's my driving?

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oliverplus: (Stars)

[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-23 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oliver Day | [livejournal.com profile] oliverplus

Oliver has been going through a lot of crazy stuff lately, so I'm definitely interested in whether or not his reactions/development have been realistic.
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[personal profile] bonnypiperlad 2010-10-25 08:59 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't had a chance to read everything with Oliver and the wonderfully crazy stuff that's been going on, but I haven't seen anything amiss. I think you're doing an excellent job, actually, at keeping Oliver's reactions to it very Oliver-like while still letting things affect him.
oliverplus: (Smirk)

[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-25 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oliver has been involved in way too much crazy XD. But thank you! I really appreciate the feedback.

[identity profile] boxtheotaku.livejournal.com 2010-10-25 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
! I'm not familiar with Oliver's canon, at all, but I think he is doing great. Well I can only talk about recent activities tho. XD So maybe it's not much but from my point of view Oliver is handling things well, so keep it up. :3
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[personal profile] oliverplus 2010-10-25 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! That's okay, hardly anybody has seen Oliver's canon XD. But I'm so glad you think he's handling things well! He's certainly trying to. The Plane is an evil place. Poor Box, too ;_;