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realitymods ([personal profile] realitymods) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc2012-10-02 05:54 pm
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HMD

How's my driving?

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That said, please don't post here if you don't feel able to handle constructive criticism. A well thought-out, helpful critique can be a wonderful thing and shows that people care. When you're critiquing others, try to be specific about what works and what doesn't, as that can be very useful for pinpointing what a player should keep and what a player should let go.

Commence!
decrypts: (GONNA BREAK DOWN THE DOOR)

[personal profile] decrypts 2012-10-02 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Agent York || [personal profile] decrypts || Red vs. Blue - pre-canon!
lamb_of_gold: (*little:Kisses)

[personal profile] lamb_of_gold 2012-10-03 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
I am enjoying york immensely so far. This is less crit and more god damn i want more of you please
decrypts: (STRIP SMILE)

[personal profile] decrypts 2012-10-03 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
sflkhlkdshf

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excuse me while i flail at you asdflkhsdf
millenia: (Church || don't get lost)

[personal profile] millenia 2012-10-03 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
York is going to get himself killed I swear to gods.

Which I guess means you're doin' it right. ♥
decrypts: (I WAS DREAMING I WAS AL CAPONE)

[personal profile] decrypts 2012-10-03 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
any death that happens on the plane is going to be 100% south's doing. we called it already.

but asdlkh!!!!!
grip_on_reality: (Listening)

[personal profile] grip_on_reality 2012-10-08 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
YORK IS WONDERFUL! I hope he lives long enough to keep being wonderful for a while longer. But seriously, you do an excellent job of conveying his trains of thought, not to mention his way of speaking. He ist just...I love him ♥. I just hope Doc doesn't traumatize him too much!