HMD

[realitymods]

How's my driving?

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Commence!

Comments

[inhumanity]

Christopher @ inhumanity (Baccano! prior to 1933: The Slash)
Morgana @ oneiromancer (BBC Meriln AU from "To Kill The King")

[bonnypiperlad]

Jamie McCrimmon || bonnypiperlad (Post 'The War Games', pre-'The Two Doctors'.)

[lamb_of_gold]

Mu lamb_of_gold

Isaac grand_gaia

Coming off a burnout, so help, advice and words of wisdom would be grand.

[decrypts]

Agent York || decrypts || Red vs. Blue - pre-canon!

[millenia]

Marta Lualdi || Tales of Symphonia (d2 - Added Heartbreak re: Emil) || formervanguard
Riku || Kingdom Hearts (d2 - Steampunk AU) || darkercalling
Eithan Paine || Original || punkblaze
Agent South Dakota || Red vs. Blue || traitortwin
Jacqli || Ar Tonelico || fallbythesword

They all have private HMDs on their journals if you'd prefer: anon enabled, IP logging off.

Hit me. I love crit. omnom.

[grip_on_reality]

Oliver Day | oliverplus
DI Patricia Menzies | grip_on_reality
Doc | docinawall

I would love any crit! Activity is tough for me right now, and I always get nervous about characterization when I'm rushed, so do hit me up if you have comments.

[most_feared]

Agent K | most_feared
Gaheris Rhade | truth_is_cold

Watch me not totally batter myself! Watch me!

.../pops from restraint

[not_a_lamb_nor_ram]

Aries Kiran | this journal

and

Tsubaki Nakatsukasa | blackstarsenal -- whom I still have to intro! /o\

It has been a slower-than-usual activity period for me, nevertheless, any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

[sosweet]

Gemini Saga ♊ sosweet

I've been feeling kind of a slacker with him but if you have any crit is a~ll good!

[tricksterofthelord]

Hiccup - dragonnerd Yay, he will canonbump to the end of the movie soon~~

Loki/The Trickster (Gabriel) tricksterofthelord

Tthese last few days I got called out about my english grammar at work, so if it's something that really bugs you and I don't seem to notice or something, please tell me! I know my english isn't the best, especially lately, so I'd like to try and get better. Thank you~

[onehundredbeers]

this guy /flops onto this HMD as my arm pops off oh no how tragic.

[perfectpartner]

ASCH † Tales of the Abyss (d2) † sacredashes † anoncrit
EMIL † Tales of Symphonia (d2) † perfectpartner † anoncrit
ROXAS † Kingdom Hearts (d2) † otherness † anoncrit
TOKI † Metalocalypse (d1) † grampasguitars † anoncrit
GOJYO † Saiyuki (d1) † halfbred † anoncrit

Sorry for dropping the ball on activity. Just started a new job, etc etc... I will be getting back into things soon.