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thank you for being born ([personal profile] astronomia) wrote in [community profile] shifted_ooc 2010-10-25 02:59 am (UTC)

But his character is built about that one point. It isn't one minor trait. It's his core and something that effects his life heavily and everything that happens in it. If it was a minor thing, then yes, it wouldn't be a big deal, but this is something that is simply his character.

Again, I said we wanted to see him develop. The time period doesn't matter. If we had brought this up earlier, then the issue would have been not enough time. The problem is that his powers, something core and vital to his character, the huge thing about him, weren't told to us. I'm not curious about him in the respect of threading with him. I'm looking at this objectively in the sense that what I know of the character is based on what I've seen and his application and again, I'm seeing issues because his major character point isn't being played.

I'm giving you suggestions but each one is shot down with information I don't know about. Only you know how his power works. I don't. I know what you told me on his application and what was wrong. So while I can suggest and try to help, ultimately this is on you. As the case stands, we would like it if you wrote out a complete and detailed outline of his powers which includes everything you neglected to mention originally. This way, the mods can discuss this together if his abilities need to be changed for the Plane.

Also, I am not insulting you and I would appreciate it if you didn't talk down at me during this discussion.

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